Music and instruments are in time
short frames?
quicker cuts?
overall-good
Music and filming fit well
good timings
quicker cuts?
ending needs finishing
thought it was good :)
Location looks really good - suits the song/theme
close ups of guitar good
different angles are effective
in some places more cuts could be used
camera is a bit wobbly in some bits
Good sync to lyrics
the drums are good and the guitars
good use of camera all around
camera wobbly in some areas
mise-en-scene good
fits genre of song
Looked real, in sync
suits the song
great fast cuts
the cuts to the instruments work well keeping up the fast tempo
ends well
the editing is great
Good opening
not sure about 1.44
really nicely edited
3.00 guitar solo should be more obvious
better ending needed
Good start of filming before guitars
guitar solo slightly out of time
like close-ups of singer
like camera movements when its handheld
shots of drummer above look wicked
its all really exciting
so well timed
SO GOOD
Start good in time with music
singing at start a bit out of sync
close ups are good
setting suits song
its so good!
Good quick cut before he starts singing
good close ups when singing
good close ups of instruments
good shots of whole band
excellent camera movement
Handheld camera is I think a bit too shakey at the beginning
the miming is bang on time :)
The close up when he is singing is very good
the handheld camera makes i very personal
can be a bit repetitive of guitar close ups
think the editing could be tighter at the end as it gets faster
love the angles of singers face
