Feedback

As a class we viewed each others videos and wrote feedback for each group. Our feedback was mainly positive but there were a few improvements to be made. Here was our feedback:

Music and instruments are in time
short frames?
quicker cuts?
overall-good

Music and filming fit well

good timings

quicker cuts?

ending needs finishing

thought it was good :)

Location looks really good - suits the song/theme

close ups of guitar good

different angles are effective

in some places more cuts could be used

camera is a bit wobbly in some bits

Good sync to lyrics

the drums are good and the guitars

good use of camera all around

camera wobbly in some areas

mise-en-scene good

fits genre of song

Looked real, in sync

suits the song

great fast cuts

the cuts to the instruments work well keeping up the fast tempo

ends well

the editing is great

Good opening

not sure about 1.44

really nicely edited

3.00 guitar solo should be more obvious

better ending needed

Good start of filming before guitars

guitar solo slightly out of time

like close-ups of singer

like camera movements when its handheld

shots of drummer above look wicked

its all really exciting

so well timed

SO GOOD

Start good in time with music

singing at start a bit out of sync

close ups are good

setting suits song

its so good!

Good quick cut before he starts singing

good close ups when singing

good close ups of instruments

good shots of whole band

excellent camera movement

Handheld camera is I think a bit too shakey at the beginning

the miming is bang on time :)

The close up when he is singing is very good

the handheld camera makes i very personal

can be a bit repetitive of guitar close ups

think the editing could be tighter at the end as it gets faster

love the angles of singers face